Okay, things are trucking right along
Heh, I have found lots to be doing with the new biz stuff. I have a portal site for one here, have ads to add to my regular site, and am about ready to transfer my buildupyourbiz.com to Host4Profit. Think I'll save that one till tomorrow.
Let's try an experiment here:

Oh, now, isn't that way cool?? That's one of the ads I'll be adding to eDragon Marketing. Very spiffy, don't you think?
I have decided it's time to get REALLY busy on this stuff, because they've made the requirements for profit-sharing at work so high, it's not likely that we'll get ours this year. I honestly think that's not very nice of them (let's face it, it SUCKS!). So, what good is working for profits for someone that isn't going to share them?? After all, they HAVE done in the past and every year till now. So, they've decided to cut that out?? Well, I don't have to stay around while they cut other benefits--not if I can get some residual income streams going and have funds I can count on coming in regularly. Then, I can tell them to take their job and not only shove it, but STUFF it! ;-)
Mr. Sam would NOT approve of what they're doing, but that's okay. If he were here, lots of things would be different. So, the time has come to get other things going and make sure that I spend some time each day on them to increase their productivity.
Things I plan to do on www.edragonmarketing.com include writing copy MY way. Bleah on those 20" long sales pages. Don't you just hate them? You go to a page about something of interest--a product, say--and have to wade through 97 testimonials about how great it is and all their sales copy about how great it is and then, all the bonuses they're going to give you if you buy it. AND a bunch of their personal history and the reason they began the project, etc., etc., ad infinitum. Well, if you're like me, I don't even WANT to read all that b.s. Tell me a little about the product, give me three short testimonials, a brief list of the bonuses and CUT TO THE CHASE!!! 99% of the time, I get about a fourth of the way down the page and grab the scroll-bar and roll on down. I skip more than 2/3 of the garbage because everyone is saying the same sort of STUFF.
I'm beginning to think that internet copywriting is all about how many times can you say the same thing in different words?? Yeah, yeah, tell me some of the benefits, give me a reason to trust you, give me actual (ACTUAL) testimonials and then tell me how much. Is that so hard??
Well, it may not be professional to them, but I would like to see them put the basics on the top 6" of the page. Then, if someone is in doubt, let them look at the rest of the page where you list more benies and more testimonials. According to Tellman Knudson of List Crusade, it's more than a little likely I'm ADD or ADHD (Attention Deficit Disorder or Attention Deficit Hyperactive Disorder). Which I don't doubt. Think it's more ADD than ADHD, although my son was diagnosed ADHD years ago and it does run in families.
Anyway, my pages will be MY pages and not copied off a bunch of others. I mean, c'mon, how many times can you see, "Who else wants to...?" before you KNOW they're all from the same education??? And, heck, some of them don't even make a lot of sense, but they want you to think they do. Dang it, can't think of any examples right off the bat, but seems I read one recently that was like, "Who else wants to read a huge ebook and learn the secrets of the universe?" Nah, that wasn't it. But the fact is, sometimes they're actually making a statement with the "who else wants to" attached on the front, rather than asking a true question. My English grammar education rebels at it.
So, if I say something like, "Wouldn't YOU like to learn...?" don't you think that would be more effective? I'm no pro like these guys (we're talking Shawn Casey and his ilk here), but my first English writing class in college, I tried to write what I thought the professor wanted and it all came back bleeding (marked in RED). So, I finally decided to he** with that and wrote MY way. He asked who I copied it from. I had written a review of a horse show. I talked to him and he said it was the best I had written to date and was good enough to be publishable. Soooo, all those years of writing are going to change the way I do my webpages. I'll write it like I write these blogs--straight out. With a draconic twist. lol I'll let you know when it's changed. Ta, Chris
Let's try an experiment here:

Oh, now, isn't that way cool?? That's one of the ads I'll be adding to eDragon Marketing. Very spiffy, don't you think?
I have decided it's time to get REALLY busy on this stuff, because they've made the requirements for profit-sharing at work so high, it's not likely that we'll get ours this year. I honestly think that's not very nice of them (let's face it, it SUCKS!). So, what good is working for profits for someone that isn't going to share them?? After all, they HAVE done in the past and every year till now. So, they've decided to cut that out?? Well, I don't have to stay around while they cut other benefits--not if I can get some residual income streams going and have funds I can count on coming in regularly. Then, I can tell them to take their job and not only shove it, but STUFF it! ;-)
Mr. Sam would NOT approve of what they're doing, but that's okay. If he were here, lots of things would be different. So, the time has come to get other things going and make sure that I spend some time each day on them to increase their productivity.
Things I plan to do on www.edragonmarketing.com include writing copy MY way. Bleah on those 20" long sales pages. Don't you just hate them? You go to a page about something of interest--a product, say--and have to wade through 97 testimonials about how great it is and all their sales copy about how great it is and then, all the bonuses they're going to give you if you buy it. AND a bunch of their personal history and the reason they began the project, etc., etc., ad infinitum. Well, if you're like me, I don't even WANT to read all that b.s. Tell me a little about the product, give me three short testimonials, a brief list of the bonuses and CUT TO THE CHASE!!! 99% of the time, I get about a fourth of the way down the page and grab the scroll-bar and roll on down. I skip more than 2/3 of the garbage because everyone is saying the same sort of STUFF.
I'm beginning to think that internet copywriting is all about how many times can you say the same thing in different words?? Yeah, yeah, tell me some of the benefits, give me a reason to trust you, give me actual (ACTUAL) testimonials and then tell me how much. Is that so hard??
Well, it may not be professional to them, but I would like to see them put the basics on the top 6" of the page. Then, if someone is in doubt, let them look at the rest of the page where you list more benies and more testimonials. According to Tellman Knudson of List Crusade, it's more than a little likely I'm ADD or ADHD (Attention Deficit Disorder or Attention Deficit Hyperactive Disorder). Which I don't doubt. Think it's more ADD than ADHD, although my son was diagnosed ADHD years ago and it does run in families.
Anyway, my pages will be MY pages and not copied off a bunch of others. I mean, c'mon, how many times can you see, "Who else wants to...?" before you KNOW they're all from the same education??? And, heck, some of them don't even make a lot of sense, but they want you to think they do. Dang it, can't think of any examples right off the bat, but seems I read one recently that was like, "Who else wants to read a huge ebook and learn the secrets of the universe?" Nah, that wasn't it. But the fact is, sometimes they're actually making a statement with the "who else wants to" attached on the front, rather than asking a true question. My English grammar education rebels at it.
So, if I say something like, "Wouldn't YOU like to learn...?" don't you think that would be more effective? I'm no pro like these guys (we're talking Shawn Casey and his ilk here), but my first English writing class in college, I tried to write what I thought the professor wanted and it all came back bleeding (marked in RED). So, I finally decided to he** with that and wrote MY way. He asked who I copied it from. I had written a review of a horse show. I talked to him and he said it was the best I had written to date and was good enough to be publishable. Soooo, all those years of writing are going to change the way I do my webpages. I'll write it like I write these blogs--straight out. With a draconic twist. lol I'll let you know when it's changed. Ta, Chris